The day we parted

parting

We will never meet again was the promise

And the promise be broken was the hope.

The day we parted

Your smile said ‘oh you can live without me’

But your eyes betrayed ‘I know you cannot cope’

The day we parted

“Even if I am not visible” I said

“You’ll find me whenever you grope”

The day we parted

We started a journey to discover

That love is freedom and not a rope

The day we parted

16 responses to “The day we parted”

  1. There was more there…I felt as though you cheated 🙂 Thanks for always, a great read.

    1. Oh God! what makes you think I cheated!
      🙂 Thanks for the read and the encouragement.

  2. amazing the day we parted was the last day of mah life :0

    1. Thank you so much. 🙂

    1. Thank you so much for encouragement. Coming from a writer like you, it’s a reward. 🙂

  3. nice one sir..

    1. Thank you so much. 🙂

  4. Sumit Chaddha Avatar
    Sumit Chaddha

    Superb!
    Kuch yadein asi hoti jo hamesha taza rahti hain.

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