Let us zoom in on issues.
We will never meet again was the promise
And the promise be broken was the hope.
The day we parted
Your smile said ‘oh you can live without me’
But your eyes betrayed ‘I know you cannot cope’
The day we parted
“Even if I am not visible” I said
“You’ll find me whenever you grope”
The day we parted
We started a journey to discover
That love is freedom and not a rope
The day we parted
There was more there…I felt as though you cheated 🙂 Thanks for always, a great read.
Oh God! what makes you think I cheated!
🙂 Thanks for the read and the encouragement.
Lol 🙂
amazing the day we parted was the last day of mah life :0
🙂
Amazing set of words..
Thank you so much. 🙂
Great writing! 🙂
Thank you so much for encouragement. Coming from a writer like you, it’s a reward. 🙂
nice one sir..
Thanks Harsh. 🙂
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Nice poem 🙂
Thank you so much. 🙂
Superb!
Kuch yadein asi hoti jo hamesha taza rahti hain.
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